Hey there Adrian, welcome!
I really like the image/pose, nice shot! IMO, and you can take that for what it's worth, the focal point is the baby's eye. I think you're losing it a bit because of the more intense lighting at the lower part of the image. I did a fast tweak here to show you what I mean. Hope you don't mind? You can now tweak it again to taste regarding the lighting intensity.
I also prefer Rick's edit as its more smooth and has some distractions removed.
The headless mom is still a problem for me, I think I would have lit her to include her or crop closer on the child.
I agree with the above. The lack of lighting up to the mother of the child in the shot throws me a bit. I would have liked to seen either the shot cropped in tighter or lighting to include her but overall the concept is nice.